One day a family of monkeys were collecting some food. It was dark and the mum said to everyone.
"We have enough it's about to rain, so let's go home. Come on Jojo."
Jojo was the runt of the family, he loved the outdoors.
"I just have to get this one," said Jojo
"It's too high," said his dad. "I can do it!" said Jojo.
As he reached out to grab the fruit he slipped in the wet weather and fell all the way down.
"NOOOOOOOOO!"cried his parents.
As Jojo was just about to hit the ground he grabbed on to a vine and swung all the way back up to his parents and fell into there arms.
"I told you I could get it!" said Jojo.
"Phew" laughed his parents with relief.
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